Amanda Elpers (Unexpected Event)
Chelsea Adams
1. Is the introductory paragraph engaging? Why or why not? What does the writer give you to make you want to continue reading?
The story starts out very catchy and drew me in to figure out what was going to happen next. Once she stated it was late and she was starting to walk back to her apartment I knew something bad was going to happen. Since she presented this detail without giving away the outcome too early in the story it encouraged me to keep reading. I really enjoyed the suspense! However, it needs to be proofread. I was a little confused at times and had to re-read some sentences because of errors which could easily be eliminated by proofreading.
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